Friday, July 1, 2011

Are my song lyrics Ok?

Alright my band: The Crisis Code, is a school club and recently we
preformed one show at the school talent show. The school seemed to
love it, we got into the top 10 so now we are going to another high
school to preform. I am so nervous, we already did this and the lyrics
seemed ok. But now the whol group is worries if the lyrics are alright
or not.

Fyi:
(Kion/Chorus) Kion is the chorus, it is being sang by a boy.
(Girl Vocals/Chorus) Easy, its sung by Ashley, so its a girl's vocal
(obvious)

(Sings Softly)

Feel The Remedy
(Kion/Chorus): Remedy
Move with the Remedy
(kion/Chorus): Remedy

(Loud and slightly fast/Upbeat)

My feet hit dance floor,
You begging me,

(Kion/Chorus): More More

Hearing the crowd's roar,

(Kion/Chorus): Roar

You can't wait for,

(Kion/Chorus): More More

Poison pumping through my Veins
(Kion/Chorus): Veins

Holding me down like Chains
(Kion/Chorus): Chains

(Sings Soft)

Baby you have my...
Baby you have my...
Have my...
Have my...
Baby you have my...
(Kion/Chorus (shouts) ): REMEDY

Save me,
Save me,

(Background Girl's Voice/Chorus): (sings high-pitched) saaaaaaaaaave
me!
(Fast)

I'm begging you

(Kion/Chorus): Beg me
I'm begging you
(Kion/Chorus): Down on your knees
(Background Girl's Voice/Chorus): saaaaaaaaaave me!

(Upbeat/quick)

I can feel your venom
(Kion/Chorus): Venom

(Soft)
Tainting my heart,
Tearing it…
Apart

Give me my….

(Shouts)
(Kion/Chorus): Remedy, Remedy, Remedy

Dance with me,
Dance with me,

Make me scream

(Kion/Chorus): More, More,

Drop to my knees

(Kion/Chorus): More, More,

(Back to soft, but loud)

I'm begging please,

(Kion/Chorus): More, More,

(After each stanza pause, words will be sung strongly)

Please!!

Release!!

My..

(Shouts)
(Kion/Chorus): Remedy

(Slowly voice fades, and becomes softer)

It's killing my moves,
Baby, I disapprove,

You not impressing,
Just stop messing,

(Pause after each stanza)
With,
My,

(Yells, loudly and powerfully)
All: Remedy!!!

What do you think?

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